Wednesday, October 28, 2020

My postcard

I am learning about making a what is real and what is fake on the internet I found it easy to write my postcard for my mummy and making her very happy I found it hard to think about what i should write on my stems for my blog Next time I will do what i have to do and not get distracked

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora jordan l liked how you added yourself inside of the water.
    Also i liked how you added a long sentences
    Maybe next time you could make yourself brighter so it would be like the sun is reflecting on you.

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    1. Kia ora alexis
      Thank you for the nice comments and yes i should of made me more brighter so the sun could reflect on me but i'm very greatful for you're kind comments.

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